Major Heartache

Yet more changes. Alex suggested I put in a new scene to explain why the villains are chasing after them. He also reckoned I need to change the big showdown at the end, to have the hero be more pro-active.

Getting all this supplemental material together right now. I reckon, all in, the Major will add up to about 500 pages, including the rough draft, and all this background character gumph. It’s lucky we’ve still got free printer access.


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